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Viendo todo de un arbol by ~esanchez7587:iconesanchez7587:

Categories Literature > Poetry > General Poetry > Open


Sentado debajo de un arbol,
Pienso en todo el campo.
Debajo del sol
Estoy pensando en lo que amo

Pasando el tiempo
En pura libertad.
Mirando mi pasado
Tomo la naturaleza en amistad

Viendo todos crecer
Mirando de todo nacer
Paso por todo la felicidad que tuve
Mientras desaparece la nuve

Me pongo de pies
El cielo de color de pies
Me voy a donde nomas supere
Con las hojas verdes, donde me enamore.
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Author's Comments

This poem was written as an assignment on my Spanish class (yes, I have Spanish). Anyway, I had trouble writing it 'cause poetry is not a thing I commonly do. The theme was "Nature". I kind of wrote it into a love poem thing too. Not sure how someone would understand it in their own view but worth putting it up.

PS: It's a one-shot and I got a huge applause for this :D

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~ArtGoddess14 Oct 18, 2008, 9:39:34 AM
OMG, I love this poem!! ^_^ It's very beautiful!:love: You're a very good poet!

P.S. I speak Spanish.
:iconesanchez7587:
~esanchez7587 Oct 18, 2008, 1:06:37 PM
Wow, thanks :)
Yeah, this is one of my poem I'm proud to have written... I have another one I wrote but I don't have it with me at the moment (used it as a class assignment :P ) but when I get it back, I'm gonna put it up.

Gracias! :D
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~ArtGoddess14 Oct 18, 2008, 7:25:55 PM
De nada (you're welcome)!:hug:
:blowkiss:
:iconartgoddess14:
~ArtGoddess14 Oct 18, 2008, 7:55:21 PM
Awww!:blush:
*gives you another kiss, and a cookie!* :blowkiss::cookie::cookie:
:iconesanchez7587:
~esanchez7587 Oct 18, 2008, 8:01:23 PM
:hug: :hug:
*double hugs* with cake that says "Thank You" :cake: :D
:iconartgoddess14:
~ArtGoddess14 Oct 18, 2008, 8:21:33 PM
YAAAYY CAKE!!!
Umm, okay, that's enough for today. Let's not do this again before we go crazy, LOL!!:XD:
:iconesanchez7587:
~esanchez7587 Oct 18, 2008, 8:22:56 PM
Alright, my bad :P
Well, final 'thank you' for the comment :)
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